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Electronique v1
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Electronique is a project for school I'm working on.
This was just a first draft of the design, far from perfect ( too much candy-looking ) but I wanted to share it nevertheless.
I know it's not orignal.. but I like how it looks
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Electronique is a project for school I'm working on.
This was just a first draft of the design, far from perfect ( too much candy-looking ) but I wanted to share it nevertheless.
I know it's not orignal.. but I like how it looks
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I'm critiquing since you said it's far from finished yet. It's fresh, colorful and uses nice graphics, but it feels to me like one of the so many. Still it's pixelperfect for it's kind. I love the double pixellines and embossed fonts. I don't mind the candylook too much, you're aiming for a party people (and I'm sure they love pink, purple and blue lights).
What bugs me a bit is that the logo seems unfinished. It looks like a rough presentation, for what it could look like later. It's rather poor compared to the quality of the headsets.
You didn't score high on originality and impact, but it's a great start. I'd love to see your progress from here on. I'm sure everybody could learn from following your progress.