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Imagine Air by janvanlysebettens Imagine Air by janvanlysebettens
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Imagine Air is a virtual airline that provides the service to travel anywhere.. while staying home.


Something I was working on for school, but I'm not really pleased with it. It looks good, but it doesn't really fit the concept. Which means I'll rework it, but I wanted to share it nevertheless.

I had a lot of fun making that header by the way ;)

Enjoy.

And no, this design is not for sale. Sorry.
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:icontaenaron:
A really clean and simple design as contrasted with the header. I really like the way the image at the top was made (soft transitions and nice colouring). But the important thing is that you first have a look at the page's content (at least I had) and that is what a homepage should achieve.

I'm not sure about the plants on the left and right side that combine the header with the body. It first reminded me on christmas (on a first sight it looked like a typical christmas branch of a fir tree). So I would suggest to use something else.

But besides that, as I already told, I like the overall look of the design!
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As a casual observer, the very first thing I saw in this layout concept was the giant chair. I didn't see the header, nor the logo, nor the tagline. What I saw was the chair?
Why? Quite simple, of course: color contrast. The orange contrasting with the blue meant my eye went directly to the seat, which in actuality is probably the least important part of the design (since it kinda resembles a pea pod and took me a while to understand what it was supposed to be).

I love the texture and detail in the header image, but part of me thinks it could be a tad bit overboard. That is likely personal preference, though.

The logo you created for the tip-top of the site design is pretty nice and simple, but like I mentioned in my initial paragraph it's lacking in contrast. That logo should be orange/yellow/red. Some warm color would do wonders to help it pop out of the layout. I'm not sure if the globe+hot air balloon is intended to be a part of the logo, but if it is it's too far away from the typography. If it's not part of the logo, then it's too close to the typography. ;)
Either way, I think the hot-air balloon globe idea is awesome and should be elaborated upon, but the photorealism in the actual object makes it non-functional as a usable and appropriate logo.

Lastly, I feel like you sort of gave up once you got past the introductory area (the part with the orange pea chair). The header is this hugely elaborate, magnificently-detailed image with beautiful textures and landscapes, while the remainder of the layout is just plain shapes and bland colors. I'm ignoring the fact that you used redundant imagery as filler at the bottom, of course, but that's an issue too.

Long story short, I love what looks to be the beginnings of something great. It just needs some more attention and love put into it. Knowing what you can do with design, though, I know there could be more to this than currently exists. Shove some more Jan-brand brilliance into this thing and it'll shine that much brighter!
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metalStone Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
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diegocogo Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
this has been your time to shine
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6joker69 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
I figured I should share the wealth
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Giallo86 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
wowo
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gianluk91 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
wow.... really great!
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srinithi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
Nice
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:iconhfrezza:
HFrezza Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Very cool header!
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PNDESIGNz Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Very cool. I like your details :)
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vopo Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011
The header is very nice, great work!
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kypoptina Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
Love the landscape above!
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hyunbass Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
nice design
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saikiranreddy Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
elegent n awesome
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barborkabeniatkova Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
nice :)
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neopath Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
killer design
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Elex39 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Featured on [link] !
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:iconpessence:
PEssence Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010
header is awesome :)
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:iconryanbdesigns:
ryanbdesigns Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
excellent work!
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keebod Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
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Lorem Ipsum :-/
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Sunwell2 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Nice desing
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nellachunkymonkey Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
hello, I am currently looking for a graphic designer/ web designer, if interested please note me :)
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xinasaremi Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
Amazing! Will you tell me how long this took you?
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:iconomniflux:
Omniflux Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
So creative. This design is amazing!
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Stank-Dog Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010
question.... why does every single wordpress (and otherwise) layout example i see have that same exact text pasted all over it?
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culacino Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
I enjoy looking at this very much, great work!
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Bundou Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist Interface Designer
awesome. where did you get the plants?
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sala7skedo Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2010
Awesomeeeee
Can you send me this pyramids image please ?
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:iconmeg1983:
meg1983 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010   Interface Designer
awesome header
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:iconmajedesigen:
majedesigen Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
CREATIVE
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macca002 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
Looks just like the free website template called 'earthling 2', but with a different header.
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HXI-design Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
i like it looks very good! time to relax :D
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:iconpsycho-vinos:
psycho-Vinos Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Incredibly creative! Too bad it isn't real :(
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TheCrudity Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
awsome!
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sheikhrouf23 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009
wonderful
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omeruysal Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
cok hos
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:iconolgola:
Olgola Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing header!
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:iconi-am-a-pickle:
i-am-a-pickle Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Really pretty. Its really popular aswell.
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rameexgfx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Student Interface Designer
very nice
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:icondeebong:
deebong Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
this is really amazing m8 :)
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:icontheqmark:
theQmark Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
Great layout :)
may I ask where you got the stock images ?
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Billy-Belynda Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
this has been featured here
:heart:
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Nathukela Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
This design looks great, easy clean and good colors
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:iconspovv:
spovv Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009
Very fresh design, good work man :)
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lelouch604 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
it seems so fantasy, i like your imagination
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Swiftau Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
That's wicked, great job mate! :)

The only thing I don't like too much is the navigation. Compared to the rest of the design it just looks very plain.

Still a very nice job :+fav:
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